Hey dis poem was really good. thanks 4 comenting on mine:)

awsome

this was reaally good i love the way you expressed your self

hi this was a brill poem! it really has feeling keep it up love karima

loved the poem, the final thoughts of someone committing suicide, really has a sorry feel to it, K

thank u soooo much chris !!!!

That was so good Jodie!!!! I wish i had talent like you!!! I love your poems to much!!!! Keep it up and I'll keep reading and writing!

I loved the poem. Your great with words. Keep it up and never stop writing.