Hey everybody. Please comment on my poem and tell me what you think of it.
lanna

This one hit home because I'm going
thru this with one of my closest friends
right now. What a terrible time it has been.
I wish I had the talent like
you and so many others on this site to put my thoughts and feelings into
words.
Nicely done.

Hey sis.i know how you feel.i still miss her all the time.u know u can always talk to me and we have ash to talk to also.great job on writing this poem.you always write good ones.

"She isn't the first,
And she won't be the last"

That is a very true statement!
And you did a great job on this poem and putting your emotions into words
5/5
*Gem*