Oh me gee! xD The last stanza really was the one that popped out to me. I loved the raw emotion you had throughout the whole piece, and the flow was a little rocky, yet again, but it wasn't too bad. Where you get this emotion, I do not know, but how you apply it is what amazes me. Oh BTW, you're on my favourites list as of now. ^_^ Keep it up. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Eeh! I like (Eeh?) Beautiful rhyme pattern- halleluljah someone who understands the syllable rhyme dependence! Wonderfully balanced piece, I like the message and how the poem is started AND concluded.