Really good! I like the style you wrote it in! Great job! Keep it up!

I have never seen this style before, but I enjoyed it alot.
I don't know why it has been downvoted, I thought it was good.

Very good poem. wish it had more to it.
I liked it though. 5/5

I really liked this. It was pretty simplistic, but I enjoyed it. I also like how you turned it around from being very positive, to ending it on a negative. Nice work.