Comments : Dream the Fist, Wrist, and a Twist

  • 12 years ago

    by Moose

    This is really good, i like your style of writing its very indervidual. and i love the way your talking about something without actualy saying it.
    its very good


    -Last night i walked with a zombie-

  • 11 years ago

    by Liz

    I like this poem alot i like the first stanza the best

    I wrote on my wrist,
    And with this dream
    There came a twist.

    that part the most

  • 10 years ago

    by Katie

    Interesting title. The poem itself is different, and I like that. Great job, and thanks for the comment. :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Amber

    Love it