Very nice, very sweet, very rhyming-like. It was a lovely poem, one after my own heart.

However, two things:
1) Shall always will we have the other
To burden all of one another

The top line is a little confusing for me. "Shall always will?" Do you need a comma there? Or something sentence restructuring?

Secondly, less importantly, that I don't think it's even really worthy of mention:
And what is it that I ought to say?
When feeling just this way
And is there anything I ought to do?
For a sunset's meaningless without you

This stanza seems slightly at odds with the rest, especially the last line, which contains a syllable too many, thus stopping the flow of the poem.

But as I say, hardly worth mentioning, it works well with it there.

Nice poem (-:

Amazing poem never change your style its amazing!

And listen as it draws so near
The beauty more than ever clear
Its lovely form the soul of art
The world races, as does my heart

^^ That was my favorite stanza. So much emotion and heart, obviously. :] Good work with this one, I loved it. 4.5/5

Woah
your very passionate and creative
i love all of your writing
your so very talented
wonderful job!!