Good job on describing what happened in the past. Very good! Jpoet*
This one I did like.

No the poem wasn't about us, it was just something I was thinking about. I know you still love me, I've had my mum telling me as well 2nyt so if she knows then I obv. know. I would write a comment about the poem but you already know what I think cos I e-mailed u already. So mr Poetic genius when are we gonna see some new stuff, its been a couple of days u know!!
Love you,
Beth xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

LOL!!!!!!
This poem perfectly sums up the parallel thoughts of thousands of Americans living today.