I love the way you described her situation, which maybe was inspired by yours. I really imagined everything you said, and I can relate to it. Sometimes it happens, that you just want to be "normal" and everything turns out wrong, and you end up the same way you were before.

If you want to improve this poem, maybe you can remove the word "she" in some lines. And for further writing, maybe describe more everything, and use poetic words.

I hope you're feeling better by now, if you need anything, send me a private message. =)

Keep writing.

Good job! 5/5

XoXo
Gaby