This is an amazing write. It is simply spectaular. I have to say I agree that is follows the theme of my poem quite closely. It speaks of the pain and torture of not being true to yourself and following the lies and dark paths of others. If you cannot be true to yourself, who can you be true to?? If you don't follow your own path, you'll only make the mistakes of those before you. Your depth and meanings hit home very deeply. You are an awesome awesome writer. To give it 5/5 seems to be a shame, but I guess I'll have to settle for it

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

I really liked this poem, I think it should have been why your hopes and dreams die or get tucked under the bed forgotten well That what I got out of it good write none the less Plot121

Wow....incredible poem......very tense...the flow is perfect and also the rhyming...

there was alot of emotion put into this piece.

nice job.5/5

Wow that was morbid! i loved it!

Once again so incredible. i love how captivating it is and so many different understandings can be formed from it. i think anyone could relate to it in some way. i definitely can. you are such a talented writer. 5/5