A neat poem and an interesting way to write your poem about YISL. Jpoet*

An interesting way of writing it. Nice job and great piece. Some cool word play. The third stanza is my fave. Okay it is different and I think that it had an effective way of drawing people in. Love the scheme of how it's created. Cool work.
~Faith-less

I like the way you've written this poem - never seen this form before! I also like the way you describe things. My favourite stanza was the second one. Very emotional write.
Good job overall!
5/5

Nice format, I don't think it was completely necessary to put the YISL before the final line, but I guess some people wouldn't've gotten it.