Comments : Loves sorrow

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenie

    Wow paul....im feeling the pain.the love.the emotion..
    very talented!!
    im so sry for ur strife!! even after months of us not talking..remember..
    im still here to listen!!

    ily

    jenie

  • 17 years ago

    by Belle

    I like this poem. I ewspecially like the stanza "why do we make these mistakes,
    then worry about them tomorrow,
    fill our life's with worries,
    depression,pain and sorrow,"