Wow.....this is such a beautiful poem

i love it! great job!

Realy good work,especially

Everywhere around you this love is found.
High above the sky is a magestic creation,
Where fate of love makes a splendid sensation.

keep up the good work,see ya later honey;)

Good emotion

You have alot of talent in your writing and alot of knowledge for our age. The only thing that i can see that is a little off in most of your poems that i've read is the flow...the words are perfect, they fit and it sounds wonderful but it's like a song, it doesn't sound right when it's missing some beats, this would be better if you added a few more syllables or smaller words to make the rhyme scheme fit. i know i've given some critisizm (or however you spell that) to you and you can return the favor...and dont take this nor the other comment to heart
thanks
~*~Amber~*~

I love this one....It made me smile for some reason and I REALLY needed to smile!! Thx...