Nice poem 4/5.

Great job on this. Man, I haven't been on this site in so long. I forgot all the great stuff here. =] This is just another great poem to go in your collection.

Keep writing

xoxo >b&b

['Tis that which speaks unto the heart]
I think it should be "into" not "unto"

Nice poem. I liked how you split it up into two line stanzas, you dont see that very often. The flow was good as were the rhymes. The descriptions also worked well but I think more detail could have been put into them. Nicely done though 5/5

Oh wow. I loved the imagery in this. It was like I could see exactly what was happening. In a sort of imaginary way. =P The flow was very well thought out. I just read it, and it came into my head. The rhymes were also very original. That's definately a plus in my books. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Well done, my friend
i really liked this one, dark, deep and powerful. words were chosen carefully, rhymed well and flowed okay throughout.
keep writing
xxxx

Creepy!, soz just loved your choce of words, but they sent shivers donw my spine!

I liked the way that this one rhymed. *5/5*

Alyson