Wow! lol. great job on this. i unreserved mine cuz i have no inspiration yet to write about.

Hey Hun, nice job on this poem, I'm not too sure about the use of the word finally twice in the last line.. but other than that it was great.. well done :]

Well said.. well said.. impressive

Beautiful poem, I really understand how you feel honestly , anyways great work :D 5/5

-Mia-

I loved the opening lines...and this line too
Your words are spiked with lies decieted.
a very powerful line. good job!
Charisma*