Wow, very well written. I loved it. I advice one thing though, the structure is in a paragraph, trying putting it in stanzas, it will give it more feel and better structure.

Ciao, Joe

Its really good keep up the good work

I love this so much its really good!

Wow, this a wonderful write and dedication to your husband. May your hearts always be filled with peace and joy. Best wishes to your loving family.

sadaddy
Please read "When We First Met"

He sounds like a really great guy! hold on to him:)

I loved that, its realy a poem of sorts, but the love is over whemling

5/5

I love your poem!!!

It's always a great feel knowing someone loves you when as much as you love your husband. This love that you share with him will be everlasting. May your hearts be filled with peace and joy each and everyday.

sadaddy