Short but good...
you expressd nice emotions!
but there was something missing...i dunno wot..
Maybe reading it again and see what i mean? hope that helps!
but nonetheless nice work!
4.5/5

Keep Smiling
`*-Tormented

Wowowow... when did u start writting sad poems hunny!!!
whats wrong... ? its a nice poem... i loved the endding though ;)
i sometimes feel that way... is everything okay...

Wow! So short yet I can tell that you put some very strong emotions into this one. And I agree life is a bi*ch, no disagreeing with you there! =] Great job writing this one, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Great job...check mine out...5/5

Hey this is good i liked its short and sweet and good job:) ~melissaraye~

I like this one it kinda makes me think of me!!

Hmmm soo true..
nice work, i liked the flow to this poem and the intensity

Great poem,you could feel the emotion in it