Comments : Marijuana

  • 17 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Well I guess it was only a matter of time before you writ a poem about it. It lost me a few times, but I liked it. My favorite part was the first two lines, short, sweat and with a nice little flow. Although it's not you best piece, a good piece it is.

    Brad xx

    P.S. I notice you've writteb several poems recently. Good for you.

    P.P.S. This might sadden you to learn, but 'The Black Road' holds a lot of truth, especially in stanzas five and six, which are both completly true.

  • 15 years ago

    by selosita

    I love diz poems you did a great job keep it up n hell yea its all about 420