Comments : Illusion?

  • 17 years ago

    by Freddie

    Thats so sad....if u eva need to talk im here, ive had enough life experience for someone to think i was 50. anyway, great poem, keep writing.
    XOXO Freddie.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Revive me from my death
    Repair my broken heart"

    Those two lines were two of the most powerful lines in this poem.
    It was so poignant and sad.
    Well done hun! It was a brilliant poem
    5/5 as always
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by tiffany

    I liked the way u wrote this peom. by tha way.. ur quotes are amazing! good job :D