Comments : I cannot tell you this

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "You wont know this poems about you,
    Neither will I find the words to say,
    That although u may not know it,
    I love you so much more each day."

    The last stanza set off the whole poem perfectly.
    I liked this one cos the flow was good and the subject on the whole was really good!
    5/5 as always jen!!
    Luv Gem xx

  • 17 years ago

    by emmerz

    I agree with gemma, the last stanza made it all worth reading! lol not that the rest didnt either. i think this is a very well written poem, its got eveything it needs.
    >Emily@->-

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Wow soo beautifull :)) loved this one :))