Wow, excellent poem. I really loved this and how it flowed. Wonderful work :).

5/5
~[AnotherDream]~

A very good poem about cheating. Although you could put it in the love section I completely understand why it's here! Good job! Jpoet*

Oooo this is a really really good poem and it is on a great subject too Gem!
fab poem as always, it flowed really really well too =]=]=]

wuvz ya
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I know how you feel.I've been cheated on and it hurts so very much.I love this poem.

"Lying next to the man she loves
She feels an overwhelming guilt
For while he works to keep her safe
Another relationship was built"

I don't know why but I can picture this in my mind right now! I love it! Very powerful subject!
xoxo