This got the point across in just a few short lines. nice work.

Wow! Keenan.. short poem but holds soo much power [well to me it does!] Im Just like WOW!
I was wondering why u haven't written a poem in a while..and i was worried it mightn't be as good but i was proven wrong! [Yay!]
great work hun, luv it as always!
Keep It UP UP UP!

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`*-Tormented

Awww. that's soo sad. but it's pretty good. short and sweet. i like it.