How can anyone give u a rating less than 5!!! it really describes how ur feeling, and that is tallent..

Why do people give great poems anything but a 5. This is a beautifully written poem, it really does catch what you were feeling at the time. 5/5

Kalee

I liked it, and i agree with the other comments, it deserves a 5 because of the way you wrote it, i mean, it captures you, and thats good
well done
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