Wow ! I'm falling in love with your poetry and I'm adding you to my favorites! The only thing I would change is in the last line: Those pains, m'dear, never sleep--- I would replace "m'dear" with "just" or "will"... Other than that, Incredible write!

xxEvilAngelxx

I love this poem... its true and real... It perfect. 5/5

.K0rI3y.