The path of our love laid out before us in a golden glow
The light of the golden orange blazing on our skin
Sunshine a mere reflection of the heat from me and you
Burning under the skin, yearning for another kiss
Time marches on and these moments become our bliss
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I just love this stanza Bill !

The nature, the love, the entire piece is just magical.
Your poetic pen must be dipped in ink made of hearts because you create such beautiful poems of love.

Wonderfully written, my friend !
Take care, Luanne

Bill, this is absolutely beautiful, wow, I really got enchanted from the very beginning, you really captured my imagination, and you have written a wonderful piece, Well done!
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I just loved the metaphorical music of this piece. How you have captured both nature and love in one poem, was quite breathtaking. The flow and imagery was outstanding.

Great job.
Jeannie