Very sad :( but love your ryhme, great work 5/5

~[AnotherDream]~

That was beautiful. keep writing. always.

You know i feel the same way, i dont know my dad and i wish i did...

I liked it, you have to let me know when you post some more

4/5

A little diff but stil i liked it .. keep it on ..

Short but not bad...=)

True
i can relate, once again
nice true write
short, but rhythmic
5/5
~Stevie

This is wa i go go through i dont no my dad never even seen him an not the reasons u probably think y

This was sad lenise, but i love it!!
it makes me miss my dad!!!
-5/5- ~ily~

~ariel~