Comments : The Awn

  • 17 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    :-O

    Okay, that was... kind of shocking, the way that it ended in a vision of gore. At first i didn't understand the raise your sword to your ear part, and then... *wince* well, that was some imagery...

    //T.L.//

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    WOW.....that was excellent.
    The imagery was brilliant, and alot of it creeped me out, the wording and flow were amazing, and I liked the ending.
    It was so unexpected and orinigal, and it was my favourite part.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow amazing work! this was really detailed and good! keep up the great work! 5/5