I guess this just isn't my favorite of your work...it's very different from your usual style, and I'm not sure I really like it. Sorry to be critical. As you know, I normally love your poems...look forward to reading more! Jpoet*

You are one of my favorites on this site! Extremely talented, keep up the great work! 5/5

I like this style. It's different, and it doesn't rhym. People always tell me that it's not a poem unless it rhyms. So, I hate all of my work. I think I only have one or two poems that rhym a few times. Keep up the good work! =]

Wonderful write. Flows so nice, and the structure is great, Once again, seems you are not one for rhymes, but you are deffenitly good at making it flow without any. Great Job!!!

Ciao, Joe

Hmm, and why don't you like this my Dear? I love it. It didn't rhyme, which is a new breath of air for me lol. Corny, I know - but normally all of your poems rhyme. So it was nice to see you broaden your talent and show it off - great job hunn!

"Countless times
I have been awaken from dreams
Too painful to remember
Yet I must."

^^ I loved that quatrain! I could relate to it soo much cuz that happens to me all the time. I love your poetry.

5/5

-Jenna.