This maybe a short poem but it holds such significance, i really related with it, thank you for putting my feelings into words.

I love this piece!!! i can very much relate. great wording, flow, and concept. great write! =)

take care,
hana

This is my fav one of yours so far, the description is brill. =]
Just a suggestion, i think that you should try writing this in a more structured form, like
abab
or
aabb
and have seperate stanzas, i think your style of writing would really blossum. =]
Geo
ps. if u have time please comment my latest poem?