Oh sorry for ur lost, a good poem.....

Wow, very emotional poem, great write. I loved it. good Job. Keep up the good work.

Ciao, Joe

Aww. such a sweet poem. I too am sorry for your loss. The only thing I would fix is : until the line with "grandma" in it I didn't know who you were talking about. I suggest trying to incorporate who it is earlier in the poem. Its your choice though--- Again: great flow and word choice!

xxEvilAngelxx

Sorry for your lost. A very emotianal peace of writing! Good word choice throughout it. Keep them up! xx

This is really deep. i feel srry. i think this was great! it was really intense and dramatic. when u don't need help that's when they're there and when u DO need help they're not there. it makes me want to cry! 5/5 for me....rest in peace [ur grandma]

Wow....this was so sad...I'm almost crying...and I can relate to it, although it wasn't my grandma I lost but another family member...a great job, and a very emotional piece.
I'm sorry for your loss.

That is a deep poem and just like you i lost one that taught me but left to soon to teach me more. i am about to cry b.c sometimes its the ones that are gone that you wish were here cuz they could help you the most. i hope your ok girlie great job though very touching to many.

This poem is so beautiful, great meaning,
You taught me my life
The laughter and love,
The hardships and pain
The prized ball and glove,

thats my favorite part, 5/5

I'm very sorry for your loss. Beautiful, beautiful poem. Well done, and keep it up.

Wow, this almost brought me to tears, which rarely happens! wow, the emotions are so clear and really saddening! Im so sorry about your gran, and im sure your right, she's watching over you!
best of luck
5/5

~Steph.