Wow very creative girls !!!!

You 2 come up with some awesome writing. From the very first stanza I was eager to know what would happen.
Great piece girls !

Much love to you both.....

I...like it!!!!! :)

Hey, another awsome poem! Well done!
Gosh id would love to get revenge like this on my ex. Hope this isnt a personal experience!
LoveMel

That is WICKED good!

ur an awesome writer!!!!!

--Lisa--

That a good poem

Wow - i loved it - 5/5

I cant say anymore then whats been said! i loved it....ANOTHER brilliant poem. i enjoy all your poems. iu think my favourite so far is 'kidnapped and alive'....:)

I am scared now.....brilliant though...5 on 5...

Ah! I loved this!! It was like reading a story. This was great. I esp. loved the last stanza. It made me smile. haha. Keep it up, girlssss!! =)

-Poetess

Love it!

It was great! loved it alot!

I liked it alot!! I love poems like this that tells stories! very entertaining!

*amber

If someone cheats on me i would want revenge too, they would have to shoot me. great poem!!

Very well written I enjoyed this poem

!!! that poem was very nice and I enjoyed reading it
Its poems like these that make me happy I happened to come upon them
Great job and keep writing porfavor (please, haha)

If you could please read/rate my poem Classic Love Song, I appreciate it
I return the favor if you comment back

Yo this poem is mad good!
you always hear poems of guys cheating with girls, but 2 write a poem with a guy cheating with another guy is just mad nice.

!!Love the poem!!