Wow, what a thoughtful peom. You are new to the site aren't you. Hope to read more from you. You have a talent.

Welcome to the site. Had to check this out if for no other reason, but your name.

Such a truthful poem that is thought provoking. Flow was good and content nice.

Keep it up. Would love to read more of yours.

Happiness
Jeannie

Awuh this is wicked cute && trueee

Wow thats got a good structure to it. keep writing x x x

Excellent &well written

"....breaks my heart with joy.". Your end gave me goosebumps, this is a very good poem. 5/5