Carbonorfliorgin! See, I told you it was... That is the best you've ever written, you crazy, sexy, freak of nature.

Pretty good! I like it. :)

~~Willow Weeping Spirit (Spanish)

That was interesting. A very unique form of writing.

Nice work.

I can really relate to this. i love it. thanks for the comment. i'll remember nxt time.

I like the way you write, like i said before people can relate! 5/5

A trully unique freeverse. Absolutely no structure. lol. Got a kick out of it just the same. Made me smile at the fact that this is really how a poem originates. Not just for you, but for me also.

Jeannie

That was really unique, it made me laugh and made me think, i wish i could do that. but you are really talented, i like your work

Wow. this poem is so true, and something that I am sure everyone on this site has experienced more than once.

I always listen to music as I write, and it usually gives me inspiration, though sometimes I sit thinking about the song, and singing, and doing everything else to distract myself. You really portrayed that in this poem!

Commernt for the poem you requested.

i voted on the poem you requested but i couldnt commenbt on it
so here it is

this'll be the 3rd attempt at commenting on this poem...so dont say i didnt try!

I know ppl say rhyming isnt everything, which is true. i jsut prefer it.

i liked the orignality in this piece, it gave it a much more interesting way to look at it.

5/5

~Emma

This isnt my favourite of urs but still was good... keep it up

Hey haha this is how i've felt on many occasions... something i can say about it is that at the beginning, you seem to do a rhyming kind of thing, but then as the poem goes on, it sort of fades and doesnt really have a certain form. if thats how you wanted it to be, then nevermind what i just said, but if not, well i hope that helped:)