Aww. i really love it, ive been thruohg the same thing. its really good, tells the truth and i like that in a poem. keep it up babe your doin great 5/5 from me xx

I really liked that it was really good u should keep on eriting youve got some skills show 'em off

Wow this is good you are great at this writing poems thing keep up the good work

*Ashley Hager*

Nice poem! Maybe next time you could try using a different syllable pattern. Otherwise great! Nice job!

JuLiA

Nice poem! Maybe next time you could try using a different syllable pattern. Otherwise great! Nice job!

JuLiA