I really like the concept of this poem. You wrote it very well, with plenty of emotions. Thanks for your comment on my poem, it means alot. Keep up the great work. =]

This is a really cool idea, I like it. I think it could benefit from some imagery, though, it doesn't create much of a picture which sometimes gets boring. Otherwise, great job!

Very good peom. Easy to read at a fast speed. 5/5

Very good poem!
it has some emotions in it.. which makes the poem even much better...
keep it up!

It wasn't your best but It was pretty well written.

I noticed your rhyming scheme and some of words that were supposed to rhyme don't.. like love and solve. Another pair of words that didn't rhyme were pain and again.

Otherwise I'd say it was fair.