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Wow! I really love this poem! I haven't read any poems about this situation before but i like it! The flow and rhyming is great too! Keep up the good work!
-And yes haiku's are supposed to be 5-7-5 but you don't necessarily (sp?) have to stick to that. In my case, the poem sounded better using one extra syllable. Thanx for the comment!
by Twisted Heart
This was well written. Quite a mature outlook, for one so young.
The rhythmn of the poem was very well done, and although it was short, it said it all.
Perhaps, what I meant to say was: Although it was short, it spoke volumes.
by Jennifer Dziak
Hey I cant really relate to this poem and I hope that if you feel this way your pain is scarce cause it seriously sux!! well comment myne if you wish
This was awesome. Excellent choice of words and it had a good flow. I love the way it ended, especially the last line. Great job.
by The Simpsons rule
Hay! the poem was amazing, it really touched me i can completely relate to this poem!
Brilliant keep writing