Comments : Cold Comfort

  • 12 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Wow! I really love this poem! I haven't read any poems about this situation before but i like it! The flow and rhyming is great too! Keep up the good work!

    -And yes haiku's are supposed to be 5-7-5 but you don't necessarily (sp?) have to stick to that. In my case, the poem sounded better using one extra syllable. Thanx for the comment!

    xxEvilAngelxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    This was well written. Quite a mature outlook, for one so young.
    The rhythmn of the poem was very well done, and although it was short, it said it all.

    Keep writing
    Jeannie

  • 12 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Perhaps, what I meant to say was: Although it was short, it spoke volumes.

    Jeannie

  • 12 years ago

    by Jennifer Dziak

    Astonishing,.

  • 12 years ago

    by Linzii

    Hey I cant really relate to this poem and I hope that if you feel this way your pain is scarce cause it seriously sux!! well comment myne if you wish
    ~Linzii

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    This was awesome. Excellent choice of words and it had a good flow. I love the way it ended, especially the last line. Great job.

  • 12 years ago

    by The Simpsons rule

    Hay! the poem was amazing, it really touched me i can completely relate to this poem!
    Brilliant keep writing
    5/5
    xxxxxxx