Pretty good. I seem to be reading a lot of poems about sadness. hmm. Not that it's necessarily a bad thing. It's just a unique pattern. :) Great poem. Keep up the good work!

~~Spanish

It really good,
I like it.
It shows emotions and thats good =)

happy writing =D
--- Violet

I think i commented this,
but its really good.
Sometimes I relate =)

It was very good and it shows alot of emotion..keep it up!!

This is a beatuful, sad poem. 5/5 ur poem really touches my heart. ur a wonderful poet. keep writing. i can feel the emotion behind every word.

Hey you told me to check it out and I promised I would. Well I thought it was awesome,but so sad. Well I really like it. TTYL

Hey you told me to check it out and I promised I would. Well I thought it was awesome,but so sad. Well I really like it. TTYL

I liked the poem and it was very deep, I think i may have missed something in though, but maybe I didn't!!! Ha well I personlayy give this a 5/5 and I wonder how this got under anything lower than that, but hey to each his own

I love the poem babe and thanks for your comments on my poems. I found a title for the untitled poem of mine. It is "Prisoner of pardise". Tell me what u think is it fitting I thought so but I maybe wrong.

That is "Prisoner of paradise" sorry about that.

Haha, love the mcfly bit :D