Awe. this very good, darling.

...you're such an amazing poet. I love reading your stuff. I picture this being said in like a higher pitched voice, which only makes it sound better. Definitely one of your bests Ray.

Tripp

I love it, it has so emotion, so much depth and passion, I think that maybe instead of swearing you could write something with more sence so it flows in with the emotion in the poem. It's great though.

:)keep up the great work,
your friend...
alissa