...closes her hands.

She closes...
((I do not like how you use 'closes' so close to each other...But, that is just me.))

I really, really loved this one. I honestly love everything you write, though. It is perfect the way it is; not all poems have to be long. This has a haunting tale to it and it was beautifully written, as always. Wonderful job.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

+.+ It may be short, but it creates such a powerful story in those two short paragraphs. Well done +.+

It may be short, but the story behind it is so strong and heartfelt.. Very nicely written, the imagery was excellent and it flowed nicely too 5/5 xx

Beautiful And Storng, Very Well Felt

5/5

-Mia

Wow great poem.. full of emotion and meaning.