Comments : When Our Love Ends

  • 14 years ago

    by tomuchhurt

    I really like it, very powerful and very deep, I love the fact that you used the same sentance in each paragraph i thought that added to the uniqueness of your poem, I loved it, come check out some of mine sometime!
    XOXOX
    Kamille

  • 12 years ago

    by Qpid

    This is a very nice poem mashallah.well written.
    my name is Lamia too by the way..:)