I think this is good but you might want to change the last line 'Dreams aren't real--People would fly' i think you should change the o
would to will, and put a but before people!! (soz just voicing my opinon!

Open the door to look inside
Behold, your imagination's pride

such thoughts can be thought bout these two lines. i trully loved this poem. it was wonderful to read and made me think. well done. keep writing.

5/5 David