Comments : Watery grave

  • 17 years ago

    by Destiny

    This kinda makes me sick
    to my stomach cause like...
    I don't know if it's real or not
    But to think that y'know..
    Her parents didn't even care.
    Frickin' sad.
    Good poem though!
    i loved it.

  • 17 years ago

    by cassie

    Hey,
    Great poem you are very talented,I could feel the intensity in your words,
    I know how you feel if you ever want to talk im always here,
    Please comment on some of my poems,
    It would be greatly appreciated,
    Love cass xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Marissa

    Great work! Your poem is really good! Keep on writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sadie bishop

    Wow, deep,true and amazing.

  • 17 years ago

    by broken reflection

    Woah gorgeous u r so talented, keep it up.... hmm i wish i could jump to my watery grave sometimes....but then id get a lecture for not turning up to school, 5/5....