The only thing that threw me off was that you had the first line as truth and the last line as lies- aren't they supposed to relate?... unless they already do in a way I don't see... Other than that, I really enjoyed this poem. Keep up the great work!

xxEvilAngelxx

Ya i realized that after i submitted it lol...and umm if anyone is wondering y i put the word blush...i have no clue but the only thing i can think of is...blush is a type of makeup or whatever...so basically...trying to hide the truth through beauty? i dunno thats the only thing i came up with lol

pretty sad when u dont even know what ur own poems mean hahahaha

Blush is a type of make-up haha. That made me laugh and I dono why.

Wow...a.d.dmuch?