Nice poem,.. i can relate to that
real good overall flow
So a 5 for you

Wow, this a great poem!! thats how i feel too.. my heart has been broken a lot.. i can't seem to find a way to make it stop... i can feel my pain every morning when i wake up and i dread getting out of bed cuz it will mean i have to face another day of my broken life
anywayz.. i love the poems!!!