I love it, you are a really good writer,
you are now one of my favs
(thanks for your comments)
swe3t xx

Oooh, good poem.
I like it, its very real and reminds us to always be grateful for what we have. I also enjoyed reading it as i think it potrays a feeling of hope.

Kelly
xx

First of all thank you for the comment you left me. Thank you for writing this poem even though you didn't write it for me it reminds me of how I wish I could look at my own life sometimes. Life isn't always so bad after all.

-rachel

Hey i really like ur poem...
it shows and reminds ppl to think about things and relate and be grateful for what we got,... reminds me off my regret's poem u commented on....

take care xhx

This reminds me of a quote i had on the front of the journal once, which i try to remember:
"the soul would have to rainbows, if the eyes had no tears." you did a nice job of conveying that which we should all remind ourselves. nice job :)