That was really good, i think it flowed well, so much emotion and meaning.
poems don't have to rhyme and i liked this one
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The flow doesn't matter to me, so long as the topic doesn't bore me. This one didn't, so you have no worries. Lol. I liked the depth you created throughout the poem. It was golden. Nicely done. =). 4.5/5

I like the idea of this poem alot.. and your write really well.. and i know that not all poems have to rhyme.. but all poems do have some sort of rhythem.. i couldnt find it in this poem.. some lines are short and choppy and others are longer and seem out of place.. but may just be the way im reading it

I must be honest and say that i normally do not like poems that do not rythem because i dont think that they flow good... but i think that this one was really good... NO complaints