Aw. That was beautiful/sad. I know how you feel. Check out my poem Thank you for the lies. 5/5!

Taylor♥

I rarely read friendship poems here, but this one surely proves me wrong,
it very good in almost every way,
"I shall cry this ocean,
And I wait to be reborn," is very well found, the third stanza seems to be so hard or even sad ,
the forth stanza really is very very good in choice of words, rhyme and rhytm
perhaps the sentence "I no longer know of you're sweet words" is a little bit to long for a good flow
but really,a very very good piece of poetry
keep it up :)

Wow, very well written, the flow and the Rhyme scheme was great. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Loves this one also! :3

Umm.... amazing? wonderful? fabulous? whatever I say it doesn't even begin to describe this poem. 5/5.

~KM~