Comments : Last Day Alone

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Aw. That was beautiful/sad. I know how you feel. Check out my poem Thank you for the lies. 5/5!

    Taylor♥

  • 17 years ago

    by Oceansoul

    I rarely read friendship poems here, but this one surely proves me wrong,
    it very good in almost every way,
    "I shall cry this ocean,
    And I wait to be reborn," is very well found, the third stanza seems to be so hard or even sad ,
    the forth stanza really is very very good in choice of words, rhyme and rhytm
    perhaps the sentence "I no longer know of you're sweet words" is a little bit to long for a good flow
    but really,a very very good piece of poetry
    keep it up :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, very well written, the flow and the Rhyme scheme was great. Keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 15 years ago

    by Joshua Lee

    Loves this one also! :3

  • 14 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Umm.... amazing? wonderful? fabulous? whatever I say it doesn't even begin to describe this poem. 5/5.

    ~KM~