Brilliant use of repetition!
And i have to admit, the rhyming was excellent and the flow didn't sound forced at all.
And to top it off, the whole concept of this poem and it's emotion just took it to a whole new level.
You deserve the 5/5 i'm giving you.
Keep writing!
*Gem*

Oh my god, i think i could read your poems all day,

Get emotion in that one! is it all what your feeling? or is it just words to you?

5/5

Damm your good
i agree with everything their saying and more 5/5

This poem is one of the best i have ever read it was awsome i loved it

signed,
maidison
aka
maidi