Great poem! every word. i really like the 3rd and 4th stanza

5/5. This one is better at discription. I loved it. I loved how you ended this poem. Very emotional. And I have been through that so if you ever need me just e-mail me!

Amazing piece!
Oh its so great. I loved how you showed all the hurt then just ended it with a kinda defeated line
"And now it's me who no longer cares"
I think its great. 5/5

Kelly
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Just how i feel about a special someone. it was a lovely poem, well done
xxxxx

Sounds quite hard, you made the emotions you felt very clear,
very well written
keep it up :)

My original comment was deleted, and i'm p0ed about that because it was nice and long. grr.
anyways, again, different. new. exciting, refreshing. the words you use are..you know original, but thats not the word, but you know what i'm saying right? the last paragraph is really said and i'm hoping it isn't true.
the line "My false barrier of strength"
woooooooooooow g. flavor flav! sorry, had to do that. but that was SO GOOD! i can't think of a better word, you know, but it was just so great and so good and ughhhhh. ok, sorry, anyway, as flavor flav would say "this girl deserves some mad props g, you know what i'm sayin bro" aka 5;5