I feel that these poem relates to me

LIKE OMG!!! ANOTHER GOOD ONE!!! Hunni, your poems sound just like my last love. Whom I still love but dumped me for her, and I still date guys but love him!!!

I liked this...
Flow was flawless throughout the entire piece, the ending intense and hardhitting.
The only thing I didn't like was that some of the poem was written in short hand...in my opinion it lessens the impact of poetry...
Apart from that howver, you did great with this.