Omg.... o_O It's very good! Keep it up.. *5/5* ^^

*tear* that's beautiful

What an amazing poet and brother you are truly amazing with words and amazing in yourself you are going to heaven if its up there ill be going to hell but if you ever need to talk ill be by your side i cannot thank you enough for what you did for me may you live on with no pain in your wrists
love you brother
jamies

Awe thats sad

Awww thnx for the comment...and i like this poem...SAD BUT TRUE.....metallica lol....ily sweetheart

Awwwww! babes, beautiful poem, and agian i'm sorry for your lost m8, Keep safe tho

Luv Nikki

XXXXXX

I know how this feels.. very sorry for your loss. The poem was beautiful and very well penned
Think the part with the biggest impact is this bit, very emotinal. Keep it up xx

we were wrong
we should have helped you
but we didn't
you looked for help
and we refused
we should be dead
we and not you
so damn sad
sad but true